My Persuasive Essay



 
 
 
 

Persuasive Letter

Dear St. George Community,

     Hello have you ever been on a nature trail? Well, if you have then you probably think that it is just a path in the woods. Well, its not, it’s a unique place where people can visually see an animal's living environment. You can see nature face to face. This is why I suggest that when our class constructs our nature trail, we include part of the marsh. This spot is the perfect place to put a bench.

     However, I do comprehend that we might need to tear up some nature to put the bench in. Personally, I think it is worth it because we want our trail to be for all ages 1-101. And so if an elderly person is walking on our trail, they might need a rest. They could sit on the bench for a rest. If a parent brought their kids on the trail they could sit on the bench and watch their children play.

     I do confess, this spot is very close to the water, but it would be extremely beneficial. I know that people are different. Some people might appreciate viewing the gorgeous water.  Everyone is different and likes different things. This spot has a variety of different kinds of nature. There is long grass, cattails, driftwood, and dead trees sticking out of the water. Some people might also enjoy the beautiful water.

     In conclusion, I ask, do you still think that this is still just a path in the woods? I think that putting a bench in this spot is an astonishing idea. It will also help beautify our trail. So people can take a break and enjoy our trail.

                                                                   Sincerely,
                                                                           Mishana

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