Nature Trail Persuasive Essay
Dear
St. George Community,
I would like the big rock by the old
entrance and by the tree with the other tree twisting around it to be part of
the nature trail because it’s big and you and a lot of other people could sit
on it at once. Don’t you think it would be a nice place to sit? The rock is so peaceful and you could talk
to each other when you are sitting on it.
I would like the big rock I was talking
about to be on the nature trail still because there is a beautiful view from
on top of the rock and it would be peaceful and quiet. For example, you could
sit down on top of the rock and relax for a while.
One reason it would be a bad idea is
because you could slip on the moss and fall and get hurt. But if you were
careful you wouldn’t fall and get hurt. Or you should have supervision if
you're young and you might not get hurt.
A few cons would be that they could fall
backwards and get hurt when they are trying to climb up the rock. They could
also bump or scrape their knee when they're getting up.
Finally, I think the rock I chose should
be on the nature trail because it's beautiful, you would have a nice view
from the top, its quiet, peaceful, exiting, fun, its close to the school,
there are pretty colors around.
Sincerely,